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Jim Grieme's avatar

Erick, I always love your writing and intellectual insights. BUT THIS is probably one of the best—if not the best—written satirical pieces I have read in an extremely long time! The meter of the writing, its beat and rhythm, is phenomenal! You’ve managed to maintain the theme of AWFUL (“offal” was brutally wonderful!) consistently throughout the piece. The paragraphs were short and expressed a speed of thought I deeply admire. The staccato rhythm of the longest paragraph near the end provided the wrap-around which finalized this superbly. There are times when I am writing that my passions meet the moment and I’m in the “zone.” Dude, you were definitely “zoned” for this post! Save it for a future book!

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David Martin, MD's avatar

Excellent commentary, Erick. Permit me to add one more descriptor of the AWFULS: they advocate defunding the police while they live in secure, gated communities.

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